From 4f69e59bca224ebca91469a0d27afdd2a759da7c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alex Grin <lyoshenka@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 31 Aug 2018 14:15:36 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Update module-lbrycrd.js

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 app/components/ecosystem/module-lbrycrd.js | 10 +++++-----
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diff --git a/app/components/ecosystem/module-lbrycrd.js b/app/components/ecosystem/module-lbrycrd.js
index a52d9ac..5ef029f 100644
--- a/app/components/ecosystem/module-lbrycrd.js
+++ b/app/components/ecosystem/module-lbrycrd.js
@@ -22,17 +22,17 @@ module.exports = exports = () => `
     <div class="ecosystem__module__details">
       <p><em>This section assumes "blockchain" already means something to you. If you're totally new, the key problem solved by blockhain is the ability for distributed, disparate entities to all agree on a rivalrous state of affairs. For a more comprehensive introduction to blockchain, try starting [here]</em></p>
 
-      <p>The LBRY blockchain is a public, proof-of-work of work blockchain consensus. It is the foundation of the protocol stack.</p>
+      <p>LBRY uses a public, proof-of-work blockchain that is very similar to Bitcoin. The blockchain is the foundation of the protocol stack.</p>
 
-      <p>The most salient feature of the LBRY blockchain is the association of a normalized character string with up to 8KB of metadata. This string of characters forms a LBRY URL, e.g. <a class="__plain" href="/tour?url=hellolbry"><code>lbry://hellolbry</code></a></p>
+      <p>The most salient feature of the LBRY blockchain is the association of a string of characters (a "name") with a structured set of metadata. This name can be accessed as a LBRY URL, e.g. <a class="__plain" href="/tour?url=hellolbry"><code>lbry://hellolbry</code></a></p>
 
-      <p>The LBRY blockchain contains two parallel [[Merkle Tree]]s, one for transactions (ala Bitcoin) and one for storing LBRY URLs and metadata. This allows LBRY URLs to be trustfully resolved even without a full copy of the blockchain.</p>
+      <p>The LBRY blockchain stores URLs and metadata in a Merkle tree. This allows LBRY URLs to be trustfully resolved even without a full copy of the blockchain.</p>
 
-      <p>Conventionally, this metadata contains information about the content, such as the title and creator, the price (if any), and a unique signature allowing the actual content to be fetched from the data network, the next level in the LBRY stack.</p>
+      <p>The metadata contains information about the content, such as the title, creator, price (if any), and a unique signature allowing the actual content to be fetched from the data network, the next level in the LBRY stack.</p>
 
       <h3>Additional Resources</h3>
       <ul>
-        <li>See the <a href="https://lbry-whitepaper.herokuapp.comWhitepaper" title="">Whitepaper</a> for a more comprehensive introduction to the LBRY blockchain.</li>
+        <li>See the <a href="https://lbry-whitepaper.herokuapp.com" title="Whitepaper">Whitepaper</a> for a more comprehensive introduction to the LBRY blockchain.</li>
         <li>See the <a href="/resources" title="">Resources</a> for documentation about the LBRY blockchain, including its API.</li>
         <li>See [[Naming]] for learning more about LBRY URLs and how they work.</li>
         <li>See [[Identities]] for learning how the LBRY blockchain handles publisher identities.</li>