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skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
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I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
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I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
# Spee.ch
Spee.ch is a [NodeJS](https://nodejs.org) React web app that reads and publishes images, videos and other assets to and from the [LBRY](https://lbry.io/) blockchain.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
Succinctly, via spee.ch, you can have a user-friendly, custom-designed image and video hosting site that is backed by a decentralized network. Via just a set of config files, you can spin your entire site back up including assets, with no backing up necessary.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
spee.ch provides a user-friendly, custom-designed, image and video hosting site backed by a decentralized network and
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
blockchain ([LBRY](https://lbry.tech/)). Via just a small set of config files, you can spin your an entire spee.ch site back up including assets.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
For a completely open, unrestricted example of a spee.ch site, check out https://www.spee.ch.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
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skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
## Installation

skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.
skhameneh commented 2018-12-01 01:00:54 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences).

Suggestions/comments:

  1. No need for Succinctly.
  2. Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility.
  3. Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of Via just and you as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary.
  4. (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die 😝

Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.

I would suggest omitting some of the superfluous words and fix the grammar (or split up into more, separate, sentences). Suggestions/comments: 1) No need for `Succinctly`. 2) Mixing clauses (which a comma is missing) with a list greatly reduces legibility. 3) Can use subjects/nouns before prepositions for increased simplicity/legibility (Not a fan of `Via just` and `you` as the subject mid-sentence) e.g. `You can... with a set of config files. No backing up is necessary. ` 4) (Just my opinion) I will defend the Oxford comma until the day I die :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Also might want to note the limitations of restoration with limited/no backup.
kauffj commented 2018-12-03 16:48:23 +01:00 (Migrated from github.com)
Review

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/

Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about why this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.

I'm not a fan of my intro wording either :/ Still, the original wording doesn't convey enough about _why_ this is interesting. I'll try again, but I encourage you and @jessopb to try as well.